I really liked the last three lines of the poem, but maybe you should reconsider the title of the poem, because it spoils the effect of the last three lines. Otherwise the poem was quite evocative. I think if you remove the ellipses (...) the structure will be much tighter and it will read much better as a poem.
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I really liked the last three lines of the poem, but maybe you should reconsider the title of the poem, because it spoils the effect of the last three lines.
Otherwise the poem was quite evocative. I think if you remove the ellipses (...) the structure will be much tighter and it will read much better as a poem.
Kaushik
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